Tokens

2px — chip, badge

4px — button, input default

8px — surface, dialog

Default border

Focus ring, error state

PointSav blue -- default/reference value

blue

neutral blue

purple

slate

gold

amber

teal

10% tint of amber-60

Complement highlight accent -- absorbed from pointsav-media-assets/token-global-color.yaml (operator-ratified 2026-07-27)

10% tint of indigo-60

Intelligence/AI domain accent -- absorbed from pointsav-media-assets/token-global-color.yaml (operator-ratified 2026-07-27)

Investment-unit border

Investment-unit surface

Holding-entity border

Holding-entity surface

Admin entity / titleco border

Admin entity surface

Strong border variant

Dashed placeholder / service provider surface

Legacy entity A border -- predecessor structure prior to reorganization

Legacy entity A surface

Principal entity (named individual / equity partner) border

Principal entity surface

Intermediary (broker-dealer / asset manager) border

Intermediary surface

Legacy entity B border -- predecessor asset-holding structure prior to reorganization

Legacy entity B surface

Fund vehicle / LP / limited partnership border -- dashed pill

Fund vehicle surface

10% tint of teal-60

Data/infrastructure domain accent -- absorbed from pointsav-media-assets/token-global-color.yaml (operator-ratified 2026-07-27)

Imperceptible — color hover

Quick — button press, focus ring fade

Snappy — tab switch

Smooth — toast appearance, drawer slide

Considered — modal entrance

Deliberate — hero animation

Faint downward-cast shadow — header/top-anchored chrome

Faint upward-cast shadow — dock/bottom-anchored chrome

Default document flow

Top-most persistent chrome (toasts, docks)

Sticky/fixed site header

Modal dialogs, overlays

WCAG 2.2 AAA-conformant focus ring; 3:1 contrast against any tenant background

Expressive interaction — toasts, modals, hero

Productive interaction — buttons, inputs, tabs

2px @ 16px base — hairline gutter

64px @ 16px base — major section

80px @ 16px base

96px @ 16px base

160px @ 16px base — hero spacing

4px @ 16px base

8px @ 16px base — paragraph rhythm floor

12px @ 16px base

16px @ 16px base — body grid unit

24px @ 16px base

32px @ 16px base — section gutter

40px @ 16px base

48px @ 16px base

primary text

secondary text

muted text

20/28 — sub-heading

24/32 — section heading

32/40 — page title

42/50 — hero / landing

12/16 — caption, label, table cell

14/20 — secondary body, helper text

16/24 — body floor

16/24 — UI heading, button label, table heading

17/27 — wiki article body (IBM Plex Sans, 106.25% base, 1.6 leading, 65ch measure)

15/24 — wiki inline and block code (IBM Plex Mono)

36/44 — wiki article h1; 2.25rem per editorial research pass 2026-05-06

28/36 — wiki section heading; 1.75rem per editorial research pass 2026-05-06

22/30 — wiki subsection heading; 1.375rem per editorial research pass 2026-05-06

18/26 — wiki heading level 4; 1.125rem per editorial research pass 2026-05-06

≤ 799px — single-column mobile layout; sidebar collapses to drawer

800px – 1151px — two-column layout; TOC inline with content

≥ 1152px — three-column layout; sidebar + content + TOC

Minimum contrast ratio, focus ring against its surface

Minimum contrast ratio, body text against its surface

Minimum interactive touch-target size

Motion-reduction conformance statement

WCAG conformance target for this design system

primary-40 — input border, interactive element outline on dark bg

neutral-50 — strong borders, table rules

neutral-70 — hairline borders on dark surface

primary-40 — focus ring; 5.59:1 vs surface-base (AA non-text; corrected 2026-07-15, was mislabeled 3.1:1)

neutral-70 — disabled text on dark surface

neutral-100 — text on light chip within dark page

neutral-10 — primary text on dark surface; 14.5:1 vs surface-base

neutral-40 — secondary text; 6.2:1 vs surface-base (AA)

semi-transparent white — ghost button hover on dark

semi-transparent white — ghost button press on dark

primary-60 — button fill; 6.66:1 with white text (fixed 2026-07-15: was primary-50 at a hair's-width 4.53:1 pass with a wrong 4.8:1 description; moved to match light theme's own resting value for a real safety margin)

primary-70 — hover state on dark; 9.22:1 with white text (fixed 2026-07-15: was primary-40, a real AA failure at 2.88:1 — dark mode was lightening on hover instead of darkening, the opposite of light theme's own pattern)

primary-80 — pressed state on dark; 12.77:1 with white text (added 2026-07-15: this token had no entry anywhere in this governed source at all — only a hand-added, non-compliant value in the generated CSS at 1.87:1, a severe real AA failure)

caution-30 — warning text on dark background

dark caution tint — warning banner fill on dark page

critical-30 — error text on dark background (AA)

dark critical tint — error banner fill on dark page

positive-30 — success text on dark background

neutral-90 — wiki page background in dark mode

near-black — code block background; darker than page to create depth

neutral-80 — card, panel, sidebar surface in dark mode

neutral-10 — inverted surface (light chip on dark page)

between neutral-80 and neutral-90 — subtle dividers, table rows

neutral-50 — syntax highlight comment on dark code block

caution-30 — syntax highlight keyword on dark code block

positive-30 — syntax highlight string literal on dark code block

primary-30 — wiki hyperlink on dark page; 8.64:1 vs surface-base, 6.41:1 vs surface-elevated (AA on both; corrected 2026-07-17 — the prior primary-40 value only verified against surface-base and failed at 4.15:1 against surface-elevated, the card/panel/sidebar surface this token is also used against in dark mode)

critical-30 — wiki red (missing) link on dark page

neutral-50 — 3.33:1 vs surface-base (AA non-text, WCAG 1.4.11). Was neutral-40 (2.18:1, real failure — corrected 2026-07-17; used as the resting-state border on select/input-text/checkbox and the off-state track fill on switch, all real required control boundaries, not decorative). Matches the dark theme's own border-strong, which already used this same neutral-50 step.

neutral-60 — 5.27:1 vs surface-base (AA). Was neutral-50 (3.33:1, real AA failure — corrected 2026-07-17); shares no value with ink-disabled since disabled text is WCAG-exempt (1.4.3) but placeholder text is not.

Financial-report-layout V5 default cell border-bottom (border:0;border-bottom:1px solid #e3e3e3) -- the faint horizontal-rules-only grid, distinct from the heavier header/subtotal/total structural rules.

Financial-report-layout line-number gutter (dashboard theme only, JS-injected, absent from print)

Financial-report-layout h2 hairline

Financial-report-layout (proforma dashboard) primary ink

Financial-report-layout section-banner fill -- the ONLY filled row in the V5 canonical scheme (was #e3edf7 with a separate navy ink; V5 drops both the old saturation and the navy ink, using plain financial-primary ink instead). Corrected 2026-07-29 (V5 canonical spec).

Financial-report-layout secondary text / notes

text-primary — shared by legal agreements and financial-statement-yearend (pure black, no tints, audited-statement look)

Legal signature-attribution / drafting-notes text

Legal hint/progress guidance text

Org-chart edge-label ink -- from the Mexico FIBRA prospectus reference implementation (org-chart-print component).

Org-chart-print role band -- Mexico FIBRA reference (securities/debt-instrument role).

Org-chart-print role band -- from the Mexico FIBRA prospectus reference (Woodfine ownership chain role, consumer-assigned per document). NOT the same as theme-woodfine.css's --wf-green (#198038, the separate Client A chart family's own role color) -- two different real charts, two different real role-color choices.

Org-chart-print grey role band border -- Mexico FIBRA reference (property/asset-entity role).

Org-chart-print grey-role SVG arrowhead/edge-stroke fill -- deliberately darker than role-grey-border (#9CA3AF); a border-matched arrow reads too faint against the page. Do not derive this from the border color for any role -- confirmed only grey needs the split, but model each role's edge-ink as its own slot.

Org-chart-print role band -- Mexico FIBRA reference (trustee-bank role).

Org-chart-print vehicle/trust role (dashed oval shape) -- Mexico FIBRA reference. Matches theme-woodfine.css's --wf-yellow (corrected 2026-07-30) by coincidence of both tracing to the same org-chart palette family, not a forced alias.

Org-chart-print role band, tinted treatment -- background fill for the warm-gray role (holding companies / passive entities above the management layer). Generic value (not a tenant brand color) -- re-homed 2026-08-02 from a retired standalone color pillar; pairs with org-chart-role-warm-gray-border.

Org-chart-print role band, tinted treatment -- border for the warm-gray role. Pairs with org-chart-role-warm-gray-bg.

Interactive PDF-binder — subtitle, footer instruction

Interactive PDF-binder — draft/version label

Interactive PDF-binder — active-entry highlight fill (same value as legal/financial surface-tint)

Interactive PDF-binder — inactive TOC entry text, HOME button fill

Interactive PDF-binder — HOME button label

Legal TBD-highlight mark; pair with mso-highlight:yellow in recipe CSS for Word compatibility

Shared soft fill-in-sentinel highlight for the mx-fibra-trust and mx-fibra-prospectus families -- 'visible on review, not garish in print' (source CSS comment, both files). A softer amber than the existing placeholder-mark (#ffff00). Do NOT alias to #ffff00 -- a deliberate register choice for Mexican civil-law/securities instruments, not drift.

BCSC/OSC preliminary-prospectus red-herring notice color — NOT brand-derived, a statutory filing convention. Kept brand-neutral deliberately: this design system ships to other tenants.

Shared inter-row/rule grey for the mx-fibra-trust and mx-fibra-prospectus families -- distinct from the financial-report-layout greys (financial-hairline #cccccc, financial-row-total-rule #888888). RESOLVED NAMING COLLISION (2026-07-29): the two families' concurrently-drafted DESIGN-TOKEN-CHANGE proposals independently minted this identical value under two different names at two different layers (mx-fibra-trust proposed a semantic-layer literal 'table-rule-grey'; mx-fibra-prospectus proposed this primitive-layer name 'rule-grey-mid', per its own oq-3 flagging the collision and recommending single-name/single-layer reconciliation). This primitive-layer name won -- matches how the other shared cross-family value (placeholder-mark-soft, above) already works. Both families' semantic layers reference this one primitive.

Legal table-header/form-note tint; same value reused by financial-statement header-bg

Interactive PDF-binder — Helvetica core-14 PDF fonts (no embedding required)

Financial-report-layout dashboard theme. CORRECTED 2026-07-29 (V5 canonical spec, Fable design audit): was ['system-ui','sans-serif'] -- system-ui is a silent WeasyPrint no-op, falls back to DejaVu Sans (wide, heavy), never the intended font. Carlito is Calibri-metric; render host needs fonts-crosextra-carlito installed. font-variant-numeric:tabular-nums lining-nums is mandatory on every cell -- Carlito's default figures are proportional and would break column alignment without it.

Subscription-agreement tier-2 fill zones (accessible completion register)

Subscription-agreement and prospectus body/heading text (byte-identical stack)

Agency-suite — Tinos webfont-first

PROVISIONAL — financial-report-layout's classic statement theme; not yet pinned by the not-yet-implemented proforma engine work

Financial-statement-yearend — Calibri source-theme font

Fixed print-pixel canvas width. Drives the page-margin check: max_side_margin_in ~= (page_width_in - canvas_width_px/96) / 2. Not a universal constant -- a different jurisdiction's chart with a different node count computes its own canvas width and re-checks this relationship.

SVG stroke-dasharray for a loose/standard dashed connector (contractual/referral relationship). String-valued (no DTCG strokeStyle $type used here, matching this file's own convention for non-standard-DTCG values).

SVG stroke-dasharray for a tight dashed connector (flow-through relationship). Pairs with edge-dash-loose.

SVG connector line stroke width.

Edge-label box max width -- tuned to Spanish two/three-line role phrases (e.g. PROPIETARIO BENEFICIARIO) in the reference; English or longer Spanish phrases will wrap differently, re-check per document.

Org-chart node box height, base size. Pairs with node-width-base.

Org-chart node box height, short variant (fewer label lines).

Org-chart node box height, tall variant (more label lines).

Border-radius for the pill/vehicle node shape (role-vehicle's dashed-oval treatment).

Org-chart node box width, base size. Fixed-pixel print-canvas geometry, same convention as canvas-width/edge-stroke-width above. Extracted from legacy pre-generalization org-chart CSS (nodes.css) that hardcoded this with no token backing it.

612pt - 2x72pt(1in) margins; running-header rule width on 1in-margin portrait pages

Statutory financial-statement @page footer distance

Statutory financial-statement @page header distance

Financial-report-layout (landscape) top/bottom and non-bind side

Financial-report-layout (landscape) wider bind/punch edge

Subscription-agreement left margin (binding-wide side)

Subscription-agreement right margin (binding-narrow side)

Prospectus cover page reduced top margin

Financial-report-layout V5 @page bottom margin -- from the same @page rule; larger than top to seat the @bottom-center page-number counter.

Financial-report-layout V5 @page right+left margin (both sides equal) -- from the same @page rule.

Financial-report-layout V5 @page top margin -- from 'margin:1.05cm 1.1cm 1.2cm 1.1cm'. Four independently-set values; no existing 2-token pair could represent this, hence three new discrete primitives (top/side/bottom) rather than forcing a symmetric shape.

Prospectus left/right

Shared top/bottom — subscription-agreement and prospectus

FIBRA Contrato de Fideicomiso bottom @page margin -- from mx-fibra-trust_V2.css `@page { margin: 1in 1in 0.9in 1in; }` (also `@page toc-page`). Top/right/left of the same rule reuse the existing margin-wide (1in); only the bottom is asymmetric, to seat the `- N -` folio. Value-collides with margin-bind-left (0.9in) but is semantically unrelated (that is subscription's binding-wide SIDE margin).

Agency-suite uniform margin; also the statutory financial-statement margin (all four sides)

Minimum body-text size for web-to-print document egress (a legal/financial document viewer's print stylesheet, distinct from the letter-agreement/financial-statement print sub-domains above).

Regulatory print-engine header-anchor border rule.

CSS orphans value for regulated-document print/PDF output -- string-valued (no DTCG numeric $type applies, matching this file's own counter-family convention). Extracted from a legacy document-viewer print stylesheet that hardcoded this with no token backing it.

Regulatory print-engine H1 size (legal-agreement/financial-statement @page rules) -- migrated 2026-08-02 from the legacy tokens/global/token-global-print.yaml, alongside print-size-h3/print-size-wordmark/print-header-border below.

Regulatory print-engine H3 size, pairs with print-size-h1.

Regulatory print-engine wordmark/masthead size.

CSS widows value for regulated-document print/PDF output -- string-valued, pairs with print-orphans.

US Letter height (portrait); financial-report-layout's landscape orientation swaps width/height in its own @page rule

US Letter landscape height (96dpi equivalent: 816px). Pairs with size-letter-landscape-width.

US Letter landscape width (96dpi equivalent: 1056px) -- generic wide-page geometry, previously duplicated ad hoc across several org-chart-print predecessor files as a hardcoded 1056px canvas with no token backing it. Same page, rotated -- pairs with size-letter-landscape-height.

US Letter width — shared by every Paper CSS-print document

Filled square, deterministic replacement for a WinAnsi-undefined glyph (U+25BA) that readers previously substituted as .notdef, which happened to render as a filled box in some viewers but is undefined behavior. Drawn as a rectangle instead -- same appearance, reader-independent.

CORRECTED 2026-07-29 (project-jennifer, was 4pt -- never matched shipped code; the original value came from an early draft, not measurement. Verified against 3 production binders (MOU, Agency Agreements, MX Prospectus) + the Client A reference generator.)

CORRECTED 2026-07-29 (project-jennifer, was 20pt -- never matched shipped code; the original value came from an early draft, not measurement. Verified against 3 production binders (MOU, Agency Agreements, MX Prospectus) + the Client A reference generator.)

CORRECTED 2026-07-29 (project-jennifer, was 64pt -- never matched shipped code; the original value came from an early draft, not measurement. Verified against 3 production binders (MOU, Agency Agreements, MX Prospectus) + the Client A reference generator.)

En-dash x-position for a grouped TOC child row -- hangs in the gutter, left of toc-title-x.

Offset from the row's y baseline to the highlight/link rect's bottom edge. NOT -25pt -- the reference generator's -25/h:24 band sits entirely below the text baseline (a bug, not copied here); -7pt brackets the baseline correctly.

Centre-to-centre pitch for a grouped child row -- tighter than a top-level row's toc-entry-step (48pt) so hugging children read as a group.

A doc-parented header's own /GoTo link rect is narrower than its drawn highlight box (which stays at the standard row height) so it cannot overlap the first child's link rect.

Pitch from a doc-parented group header (a clickable document that is itself a parent, e.g. Schedules under a Long-Form Agreement) to its first child -- wider than toc-child-step (26pt) so the parent's own grey highlight box clears the child's text by ~3pt.

CORRECTED 2026-07-29 (project-jennifer, was 565pt -- never matched shipped code; the original value came from an early draft, not measurement. Verified against 3 production binders (MOU, Agency Agreements, MX Prospectus) + the Client A reference generator.)

centre-to-centre CORRECTED 2026-07-29 (project-jennifer, was 65pt -- never matched shipped code; the original value came from an early draft, not measurement. Verified against 3 production binders (MOU, Agency Agreements, MX Prospectus) + the Client A reference generator.)

CORRECTED 2026-07-29 (project-jennifer, was 530pt -- never matched shipped code; the original value came from an early draft, not measurement. Verified against 3 production binders (MOU, Agency Agreements, MX Prospectus) + the Client A reference generator.)

CORRECTED 2026-07-29 (project-jennifer, was 64pt -- never matched shipped code; the original value came from an early draft, not measurement. Verified against 3 production binders (MOU, Agency Agreements, MX Prospectus) + the Client A reference generator.)

CORRECTED 2026-07-29 (project-jennifer, was 82pt -- never matched shipped code; the original value came from an early draft, not measurement. Verified against 3 production binders (MOU, Agency Agreements, MX Prospectus) + the Client A reference generator.)

Agency-suite form-note left accent bar

Prospectus data-table total-row double rule

FIBRA portada framing rule weight -- from mx-fibra-trust_V2.css `hr.portada-rule { border-top: 2.25pt solid #000; }` (the two heavy rules that frame the cover title block). Sits between the existing ladder's accounting-total (2pt) and accent/total-double (both 3pt) -- a genuinely new intermediate weight.

Warning box, cover-rule, summary-page border (legal); source financial total rule before the yearend bundle's double-rule upgrade

Key-terms table, running-header border, data-table header bottom, financial subtotal top rule (statutory)

Fill lines/table enclosure (legal); subtotal top rule (financial-report-layout statement theme)

Form cells, signature line, dividers, hr; financial grand-total top rule

Financial-statement-yearend grand-total bottom rule, rendered border-style:double (upgraded from the source docx's single 1.5pt per the bundle's own deliberate refinement)

Statutory value-column min-width (the one px value in an otherwise pt-based domain — matches the source docx)

Document title. Carries string-set:doctitle for the running header.

Statement section heading. 1.5px bottom rule (see rule-table-header-top), no fill.

Italic set in recipe CSS -- no italic field in this repo's typography composite convention.

font-variant-numeric:tabular-nums lining-nums is mandatory in recipe CSS -- not expressible in this typography composite shape, documented here as a hard requirement.

Set font-style:italic in recipe CSS — typography composite has no italic-style field in this repo's convention

The family's base register. Cover parties/date reuse this size.

Portada subtitle.

Portada main title.

The cover draft stamp. Non-italic, plain black.

SECCIÓN / ANTECEDENTES / DECLARACIONES / ANEXOS / FIRMAS heads.

Cláusula x.y heads, declaración leads, Anexo heads.

The two bold uppercase opening headline lines of the proemio.

The cargo (title) line under a signatory. Set font-style:italic in recipe CSS.

Comité roster / criterios data tables.

Índice entry rows.

The 'Índice' heading.

Set font-style:italic in recipe CSS -- this repo's typography composite carries no italic field.

Node defined-term alias zone -- italic set in recipe CSS (no italic field in this composite shape).

Node internal entity-code zone -- monospace.

Node jurisdiction zone.

Node regulatory/status-line zone.

Node legal-name zone.

Rendered italic (Helvetica-Oblique) in the PDF generator

th/td default border-bottom -- the faint horizontal-rules-only cell grid (V5).

Wide multi-period table; up to 11 data columns

Interior divider rules (not the header/subtotal/total structural rules below).

th bottom rule -- 1.5px, no fill (V5).

Dashboard theme only -- absent in print/statement theme

tr.section-banner -- the ONLY filled row in the V5 scheme (#f2f4f7, was #e3edf7). Ink is ink-primary, not a dedicated navy (V5 drops row-banner-ink).

tr.subtotal top rule -- 1px, no fill (V5).

tr.total bottom rule -- 2px, no fill (V5).

tr.total top rule -- 2px, no fill (V5; was the old 3pt total-double single rule).

3-column statement layout (label + 2 equal value columns)

Shares the ordinal system's 20pt indent grid — used by .indent for plain indented paragraphs outside a list (e.g. continuation text that isn't itself a sub-clause).

PROVENANCE CORRECTION (caught by Fable coverage review, 2026-07-23): this rule does NOT currently exist in templates/subscription-form.css — it lives only inline in the Friends & Family HTML's own <style> block. Transcribed from the live HTML, not the canonical CSS mirror. The canonical file arguably should gain these rules — that's a project-documents-side CSS change, out of scope for this token draft.

Backed by templates/subscription-form.css's own @page schedule-a/b/c rules — verified present in the canonical file.

Distinct from aviso-importante -- a lighter interior notice box, sentence case, not bold, 9.5pt.

1.5pt cover rule. Two other rule sites in this family: hr.rule (1pt, rule.standard) and hr.rule-light (0.5pt, rule-grey-mid color).

0.5pt weight in #999 grey, not black -- shares this grey with hr.rule-light.

Rendered border-style:double at 2pt weight.

Protects the element following a heading from being orphaned onto the next page.

Present so any clause-style enumeration inherits the register -- unused in the current prospectus body.

0.625in -- deliberately narrower than mx-fibra-trust's ~1in; pinned by the org-chart-print component's fixed-width canvas. Cannot be widened without revisiting that component's canvas width first.

One responsible party per page -- eight parties: Fideicomitente, Administrador, Fiduciario, Representante Común, Intermediario Colocador, Agente Estructurador, Auditor Externo, Asesor Legal Independiente.

Plain black, non-italic -- a deliberate operator-directed departure from the SOMA precedent.

Load-bearing third leg of the inciso mechanism, alongside the counter glyph and the 26pt indent -- makes the (a) marker ride the indented first line and lets wrapped lines return to the left margin.

The recurring 26pt indent grid: body first-line indent, clause-head run-in, inciso marker line, Índice Cláusula-row indent, Definiciones hanging entry, and the generic list fallback. Held as one token so the notarial indent is never hand-typed twice.

Parenthetical inciso counter -- (a), (b), (c)... Shares the primitive-layer counter definition with mx-fibra-prospectus rather than each family carrying its own copy.

Nested/second-level inciso counter, parenthesized lower-roman. .upper-alpha incisos pass through native upper-alpha with no parenthesis -- a deliberate third case.

The family's vertical-rhythm base unit.

DELIBERATE: body pages carry no running-header text, a departure from the SOMA precedent. See oq-3 in the originating draft.

The body-row separator color paired with rule-table-row. References the shared rule-grey-mid primitive (naming collision with mx-fibra-prospectus's identical value resolved 2026-07-29 -- see that primitive's own $description).

Without it, long SECCIÓN titles broke mid-word under the body's inherited hyphens:auto. A fix, not an incidental default.

Edge-label text color.

Node body text color -- near-black, shared with the rest of the Paper pillar.

Fill+border for the blue role band; also the SVG arrowhead/edge-stroke fill for blue edges.

Fill+border for the green role band; also the SVG arrowhead/edge-stroke fill for green edges.

Grey role band border. Deliberately NOT the same as role-grey-edge -- a border-matched arrow reads too faint against the page.

Grey role's own SVG arrowhead/edge-stroke fill -- darker than role-grey-border by design.

Fill+border for the orange role band; also the SVG arrowhead/edge-stroke fill for orange edges.

Fill+border for the dashed-oval trust/SPV vehicle shape; also its SVG arrowhead/edge-stroke fill.

Fill for the warm-gray role band (holding companies / passive entities above the management layer). Re-homed 2026-08-02 from a retired standalone color pillar -- see role-warm-gray-border for the paired border color.

Border for the warm-gray role band. Pairs with role-warm-gray-bg.

The drawn active-row marker box -- filled ink, same colour as toc-entry-active text.

A group header is not navigable, so navy (which means 'this row links') would be a lie -- ink is the already-established 'this is not a link' signal (same as toc-entry-active).

No title, heading, or slug begins with the/a/an

Capitalize the first word plus proper nouns/acronyms/code identifiers only

Each revision pass sets up a clearly better next pass; revise one altitude per pass, top-down

Roughly one heading per 120-140 body words

Past this a paragraph usually carries two ideas

House target sentence length — 15-20 word band

Ceiling for a definition/compliance/legal claim sentence — a target, not a hard gate

use>utilize; end>terminate; explain>elucidate; named-number>vague-quantifier

Never borrow a named institution for prestige

Name the actor and the consequence

Not-yet-true capabilities wear their status visibly — the BCSC disclosure posture

em dash, one space each side